Remember the Sky

• Artist: MyMindIsAWeapon
• Description: wrote this for an assignment in 7th grade, got an okay grade on it, unfortanutely it was a rule that we HAD to make it rhyme.
• Date: 09/17/2011
• Tags: remember apocolyptic hopeful

Remember the sky
that used to be
Remember the soft colors
of the raging sea

Remember the kindness
that you have been shown
Remember everything beautiful
you have ever known

'Cause child
when this world does fall
You and your sons
will remember it all

When everyone's life
drops from beneath your feet
these memories of love
will be the last thing sweet

So remember the sunshine,
the faces, the rain, the sea,
But as long as you live,
Never forget
to remember me.

Comments

[xXxXxbabexXxXx]

not bad. but with the rest of the ballad being 4 lines per stanza the last part doesnt quite fit. 4 stars.