Karma

• Artist: SirenAngelique
• Description:
• Date: 11/28/2012
• Tags: karma love hate revenge pain

You stand there
Nearly in tears
Feeling alone
Unwanted
Worthless.

You don't understand
It was going so well
You loved each other
Trusted each other
You supported her strengths
She accepted your flaws.

Then she left you with
No explanation
No reason
No goodbye.

This seems so familiar...

Did you beg her?
Down on your knees
Pleading forgiveness
For unknown crimes
Wanting another chance...
Did you try to remind her
How much she means to you?

So did I.

Did she look down on you
With emotionless eyes
Before she turned and walked away?

So did you.

Can you finally comprehend
Why I hated you
Just as you hate her now?
Do you finally realize
The torture I endured
Now that you feel it too?

Perhaps this is a lesson learned,
Perhaps not.

But don't worry
The wounds should heal
In only a year or so.

And if you choose
To quit before that happens
Please die with the knowledge
That I
Survived.

Comments

[NihilistX]

While I understand the point of the poem, clearly its another person feeling the rejection, the death of a relationship and gaining the understanding of what they had subjected another person to. I feel this could have been written far more eloquently as a poem, or written with greater impact as a prose yet it sits sort of on the edge as a vignette or single scene, a partial internal dialogue.

[jackiefrost12]

i loved it