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Listen, listen....
Beware. Once you cross the line will you ever see the other side?
Threads
A single thread
Dangled so helplessly
Tied to many things
Holding together
Complex but simple
Feelings

Twirling, twirling
And then suddenly breaking

Falling, falling
So rapidly falling

Watch as it all rips
Turning into tatters

A single thread
Woven through so many
Once it breaks,
The entire creations falls apart
Dust scatters
More threads
Ripped

Destroyed so slowly
Or ripped unmercilessly
One thread
Ruined so many


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  • User Comments: [2]
    Isarde
    Community Member





    Sun Jul 29, 2007 @ 07:02am


    Good one.

    I like it. -thumbs up-


    PixieMist
    Community Member





    Mon Jul 30, 2007 @ 09:31pm



    H
    aha, we're definitely twins. ^_~

    But you write so much better than me. I love this poem, it holds a lot of meaning to it. A thread really does hold a lot together but if you look at them individually, they're so frail and easily detachable. [Hugs]

    - PixieMist


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