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Deatre Cyanide
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Wed Jun 11, 2008 @ 06:49pm

Finish this! I command you to! That way I can criticize you! heart
-Reb

The Mysterious Gunslinger
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Thu Jun 12, 2008 @ 10:37pm

Hm. Interesting. I like it, I really do. There are some minor spelling errors, but 'tis k, and to be honest, Sophia is like a brat to me. I understand her pain, and don't take this opffensivlely, but I dislike all child characters.

ALL of them. Even my own, so anyway.

Good job.

"Fear is the beginning
of wisdom."

Nina_Tayune
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Sun Jun 15, 2008 @ 05:52pm

Sorry....But the first chapter is the most boring of all as of now. You can't really get anything out of it

The Mysterious Gunslinger
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Thu Jun 19, 2008 @ 02:53am

I got out that Elialis is a brat and I don't like Sophia, if that counts. >.>

I like it, continue please.

baseball bats FTW.

=P

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