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I've been such a smart Esal today. Anyways, in English, we were learning the correct way to use dialog in our writing (like we don't) and today, I wrote about Bill and Tom.
My teacher said we could not use any parts of the plot structure, for example setting. We couldn't use bodily sensations or sensory details either. So basically they spoke the whole story. And we had to start all our stories with ''I can't believe you did that! I can't take it anymore!'' So here we go xD:
''I can't believe you did that! I can't take it anymore!''
''Well you didn't have to burn my guitars!''
''So what if I did. Give him back NOW!''
''No. I'll burn him.''
''Tommmm!! No! Don't burn Georg!''
''Then get me some new guitars.''
''Nein.''
''Then there we go.''
''NO! How will I sleep? How will I sing?''
''Du kannst nicht sing.''
''Huuhh? Take that back.''
''Nein.''
''Then say goodbye to the stupid teddy.''
''Hold on, stupid? It was yours in the first place.''
''That's another reason your not getting him back.''
''OH. I see. Oooh Tom...with his pretty teddy!''
''Nein! I promise I'll burn him.''
''Uh huh, right.''
''Wirklich!!''
''Yeahh, thats like me getting a girlfriend.''
''True.''
''What? Hey! No..never mind.''
I didn't mean to be mean to Bill in that story, it's a writer sense. It just came. xD
 t u r t l e s g o · Sat Sep 20, 2008 @ 06:03am · 0 Comments |
