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The Broken Girl I introduce to you a girl This girl is broken She’s been dropped And her pieces were shattered All over the ones she loved I introduce you to another girl This girl saw a broken girl And tried to catch her as she fell She missed and the broken girl is now dead This girl is left without the one she loves I introduce you to a mom This mom had a broken daughter She saw her daughter struggle And she saw her daughter die This mom was left without the one person who loved her I introduce to you a father This father made his daughter broken He didn’t accept the way she loved So one night he put a gun to her head And watched as blood poured out of her This father took love away from many Not just the broken girl

Posted by: omgpalex33 Sat Apr 11, 2009 @ 12:17am

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Commented on: Sat Apr 11, 2009 @ 12:26am

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Commented on: Sat Apr 11, 2009 @ 12:47am


	mom upside down (aka wow) that was so cool!.... are these poems based on real people? is this one based on someone i know? anyway, it was great and sounded depressing! its amazing to read depressing things- it barely ever happens. only a truly awesome writer can write depressing. i mean, look at edgar allen poe! he's one of my heroes and role model! you're just as good! RAAR, I don't have a signature! Mwahahaha! oops...

Commented on: Sat Apr 11, 2009 @ 02:25am


	That is awesome! You've got to tell me whenever you post new ones!

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Commented on: Sat Apr 11, 2009 @ 04:08am


	Sad, but beautiful poem, as always ^^

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