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Death
This is the first poem (that i know of) that I have written. It was written in 6th grade, and I don't believe I posted it on gaia before. I think I've come a long way since then.


Death creeps on you like a shadow in a pitch black room. So never be alone.
When you are all alone make sure you have a phone because a man may kill you and you would've known
When the days go by you will lie and tell your parents you've never met that guy
He killed your sister and gave you a blister so don't be afraid to cry
When you brother runs away just let him get away so he doesn't have to live this way
The man threatend you and tried to grab you but you ran just in time
You may be fine but with the man out in the world no one will ever shine
When the bad guys come out to play, run away






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emoly01
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commentCommented on: Sun Apr 12, 2009 @ 11:35pm
that's interesting. good for your first poem. better than mine


RAAR, I don't have a signature! Mwahahaha! oops...
commentCommented on: Tue Apr 14, 2009 @ 12:31am
That was really good =]
You write very interesting poems..... they make mine look terrible. lol.
^^



Solo_Soul_000
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