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note- Just like My Other Story This Was A Story i Worked On A While Back (if u havnt read the other please do so it's pretty interesting and short...or shorter than this one PLEASE read this and lemme know what you think?) O and sue me i like vampire stories biggrin O YEAH ignore the beginning if ya want I needa change it i jsut realized i copied twilights opening pretty much XD Again ignore it it's practically my own version of twilight....yet....also different =/
(AND I HAD TO USE A FAKE LAST NAME SO I WOULDNT BE CAUGHT BY STALKERS! XD) (O AND ALOT OF SPELLING MISTAKES XDDDDD)
Bloody Love- Chapter One

"Ashley you know you can just go to school in New York really me and your father will find the money!" my mom said.I wanted to say yes.I wanted to stay in New York with all my friends but my mom nor dad could afford it anymore.I ddin't want them to go into dept because of me so I came up with the bright idea of going to school in Puertorico.I shook my head.My mom and dad sighed.I knew how badly they wanted me to stay.I just couldn't.

I tried cheering them up."Ay mom it's only Puertorico.What goes bad here?It's what we are so heh you have nothing to worry about."She began tearing."Yes but I feel like I'm losing my baby and it's all my fault"I shook my head."Aw it a'int your fault ma.you guys jsut can't afford it plus this is probably a good thing!Now I can learn about my spanish side s'more!"

My mom rolled her eyes.She knew I was just comforting her.My name was Ashley, Ashley Deen.I was only 12 years old and supposingly supposed to be in 7th grade as of now but, something went wrong with my mom's banking account.Someone was using her identity for credit cards.They took all she had in the bank.She was already on disability so it was horrible.Same went for my father.So now we are in Puertorico all the way from New York.

As my mom began driving the car slowly I knew we were almsot there.My cousin offered to take care of me while I was there.He just turned 20 and he wanted people to notice so when he heard my parents went in dept he agreed quickly when I had my idea.Yup, that was cousin Jake for ya.I sighed we were here.I got out of the car and kissed my mom and dad.They both began crying I held my tears.When all the hugging and crying stopped they said good bye and left.

I turned around and lookeed at Jake's house.Do you know those parts in a movie when you get the feeling you should start running away from the creepy house? That's what I felt.His house was huge but extrememely dark.It was under a giant tree.That was no fun.That meant no sun.I pushed that thought away and rang the doorbell.Even the doorbell tune was creepy.I heard at least eleven locks go click then the door finally opened.

I saw Jake dressed in his usual black clothing.WHen he saw me he smiled and gave me a quick hug.Wow he's gotten stronger.I almsot cried when he hugged me.It felt like being crusheed between two boulders.His hug was really quick though.As soon as he smelled me he let me go.Did I smell or something?I sniffed my hair nope nothing just smelled like hair.Maybe he ddin't like hair.That was stupid he loved hair he had a whole pony tail.I shook my head and walked into the house.So dark.

I couldn't believe how dark it was.every where i looked it was like looking into hell.Jake saw me looking and fak coughed."Um, I uh didn't have time to get ready for your arrival sorry Ash".I looked at him and nodded.He rubbed is head and added "Well uh your room is upstairs and um if you need me I spend most time in the living room.Or in the barn." I cocked my head "Barn?" i asked.He hesitated then said "Yes well I don't sell animals like a farmer or anything I just take care of animals.Oh and don't get surprised if you find one dead.Lataley i've been having a wolf trouble." When he finshed talking he walked to the living room.I went up to my room.

As I was walking to my room I couldn't help but look around the house more.I found the bathroom which was creepy.There was some blood on the wall.Did Jake maybe encounter a wolf? If so why in his house?And why didn't he clean up this blood.Well it was Jake.Next room, his room.Complete darkness I had to strain my eyes to see.No bed? Only extremeley old fashion paintings.I tried to see the paintings closer.One was titled 'Undead' and had a blood sucking beast on it.Another 'Night of the living dead' which also had bloodsucking humans on them.They all resembled the same thing.Then something caught my eye.A news article?

It was titled "monster amoung us" I read it.

Early yesterday morning a tragic accident happened.In Mexico city twelve people were found dead along with over seventy sheep and two hugge wolves.Witnesses said they saw a man walking along as everyone else when he suddenly started jumping evryone he saw.Then even more shocking biting them.He wasn't really described as human from what legends have been in Mexico, they believe it was the Mexico monster a chubakabra.Nothings for sure yet.Police are still looking into this and are trying to look for more evidence on who the suspect might be.until then you should lock up your sheep in Mexico city.Or even lock yourselves up.

I stared at the news article.What need would Jake have for this?I looked it over and over again till I gave up.I left the room and headed for mine.My room wasn't as dark it was near a window.I put my stuff down and looked out of it.I could see the whole street.I could also hear alot of animals.Probably Jake's.I stared outside when I heard a scream.I almost fell out my window.It was comnig from outside I saw people coming out of thier houses.I decided to go see myself as well.I jumped out of my window and ran to where the crowd was going.

When the crowd stopped i heard gasps and moans.I tried pushing through the crowd.When I got to the middle I saw Jake leaning over a body.the body was covered.Jake looked at me but quickly looked away.Another man next to him began speaking."Jake, this is bad another soul taken.Are you sure it's the wolves I mean look where the bite marks are and how big they are.Wolves have giant teeth these are tiny marks.Plus wolves usually tear up the prey these humans have just had there blood sucked out.I heard some gags behind me.

I turneed to Jake and he was hesitating it didn't look like he wanted to answer.It kinda looked like he was making another excuse."Well then what do you expect Rafael?A vampire?" I heard all movement stop.I looked behind Jake and the man and some families were looking at eachother.They didn't really believe that.Jake sighed then laughed."There are no such things people." I heard some people laugh.Even I laughed a vampire everyone knows they were jsut myths to scare little kids.

Jake looked at me then the crowd."Everything's fine here folks go back to your life's." The crowd slosly dissapeared but I stayed.Jake looked at me still.His eyes looked like they were in pain.He turned away the got up and walked back to the house.I followed.

The next day I began school.Right before i left Jake had said something to me."Ashley do you believe iin vampires?" he asked.I lookd at him was he really asking me this?I pretended to think trying not to offend his stupid question.I shook my head.He stared at me for a moment then let me go.I kinda ran to school after that.All the way I felt like I was being watched.I would hear footsteps behind me with no one there when i turned around.I'd hear growls right next to me but still nothing there when I checked.

When I finally got to school I went to the office and asked for my class.I was going to be in the smartest class?Works for me.I did pass that test in New York so i wasen't really surprised.When I entered home room I felt over twenty eyes fall on me.There were twenty five students in this class.I ignored them and went to the teachers desk.She escorted me to a random seat.An all boys table.Great.All the boys looked at me.The one to my left started saying something but it was in spanish.I may have been spanish but I didn't know the launguage much.I stared at him for a moment before he laughed."Gee im guessing your not clear on your spanish huh chika?" he said.i nodded in shame.He laughed again then introduced the table.

"Well im Josh, blonde ones Mike,and dark eyes one is Nick."They all greeteed me.I looked at the boy to my right.Silver hair and blue eyes.He wasen't even looking at me.I looked away.Josh looked at him and said "Well the queit ones Alex.He don't talk much around girls.Don't know why probably shy" Josh smiled and teased.Alex grolwed at him and said "Shuddup". I laughed then heard the bell ring.I sighed and followed the class to the next room.

Math my worst subject.To my surprise the teacher didn't give us any work just some free time.I was at a new table and didn't know anyone there.I kept looking away to the ones I did know.Josh was at his table laughing his lungs away.Same with the others including Alex.When Josh caught my eyes he called "Ay chika neva got your name" His table turned to me.I blushed and said "Ashley" Josh laughed."Well then come over Ashley ya look so lonely where you are." I thought then walked over and took a random seat.Josh stared at me."So where'd ya come from chika?' I stared at him for a moment.He rolled his eyes and added "Your obviously not from here since ya don't speak spanish" I sighed and said "New York" His eyes went big and he smiled."Cool, that place is awsome! Iv'e been there a couple times.So your a New Yorker eh?" I nodded.He nodded too.I eard some laughed behind me.O joy that must have been the 'all-that' group.I stared at them for a moment."Hmph see your already attacking the new girl huh Josh?" one of them said.

I cocked me head at them.What did they mean?Another girl caught my eyes and smiled "Eh new girl he's hitting on you ya know" my eeys went big.I turned to Josh he was shaking.He looked at me then turned away.I couldn't hlp but laugh.I laughed so hard the whole class looked at me.I turned to the prissy table.I knew how to handle them."Ay, so when did he hit on you huh?" She raised an eyebrow."Never" I smiled and said "I couldn't imagine why....stupied pissy girls leave me out of your group would ya?He can do whateva the hell he wants i don't care it aint your lfie so leave him alone got it?"

The whole class opened there mouths.The group of girls all got up and said "Do you even know who we are?" one of them said.I cocked my head and added "Do i care?" The first one mouthed a curse at me, I did the same.I made my first enemy in school how nice.They walked.Was this gonna turn into a fight?I got up too.They looked at me.I knew how to handle girly fights too.I sighed this was going to turn into a fight.The girl on my right came at me first.I ducked her punch then knee'd her right in the stomach.She yelped then ran away to another table.Two other girls came at me.I coged both their kicks and went behind them and pulled thier hair.The both screamed and ran to where the other girl was.Only the first girl was left.

We stared at eachother for over five minutes.Finally she grunted and walked away.I cracked my head.This was too much fun.I laughed and said "Running away prissy girl?Or should i call ya sissy girl?" she turned around and tried to punch me.I ducked and went for a prissy girl's worst fear.I broke her nail.When I did she began screaming like crazy in rage.She ran away to the other table leaving me in glory.I laughed then went back to Josh and the others.They all looked at me mouths open.I just sighed."Ay she gonna tell on me?" I asked.Josh looked at me and shook his head."N-no kids at this school don't tell on others."

I sighed again and nodded.Mike closed his mouth."That was amazing Ashley you have to become part of our group" I cocked my head."Which is?" he laughed and said "The care free group.We don't care about a Damn thing, unless the all that group starts something but we usually lose since we aren't allowed to hit girls" I laughed at that.I nodded and the table cheered except Alex.I looked at him.He was staring at me.I began to blush.When he saw me turn red he smiled then turned back to the others.

When school finally finished I ended up walking home with friends.All day long Mike kept talking about my new group.Apparently I was second in command with Alex.leader was Josh.I forgot the rest.I didn't plan on walking with anybody but the group caught up to me before I could go out of sight.All the way home i was asked questions.

"Ay Chika how'd you get the guts to stand up to the prissy group huh?" Josh asked.I giggled, "Back in my old school I alwayds had that problem of prissy girls." Josh nodded then added "So chika who ya living with?"I thought for a moment."My cousin Jake" the group froze.I looked at them.They all stared at eachother."Whats wrong?" I asked.Josh shook his head then began walking again."So uh Ashley has Jake done anything wierd lately?" I shook my head.Josh nodded and began walking faster."So uh can we come over later on?We gotta a load of homework so uh we can do it all together the five of us."

When he said this I almsot lost my balance.Boy's in my room?I hesitated then froze.They all looked at me.Josh cocked his head.He opened his eyes wide and said "Whoa Ashley we are jsut your friends I hope you realzie that!" I nodded but stood frozen.Josh frowned."Ashley we aren't like that." I looked at them.I sighed and nodded.I began walking just a tad bit faster then them.When I arrived at Jake's house I waved bye to the group.The did the same then walked away.

Before I could ring the doorbell the door opened.Jake was with his bags.He loked at me and said "Ashley I gotta go do something for my job I'll be back later okay?"I nodded."Um is it ok if my friends come over later then?" he nodded quickly then ran to his car.I inside and closed the door behind me.I went to the living room and turned on the t.v.He had cable that was good.I couldn't decide what to watch so I jsut left it on some random cartoon.About half an hour later the doorbell rang.I opened the door and Alex was there to greet me.Only him though.I cocked my head.He lokoed at me.I looked away and invited him in.He hesitated then walked in.

He walked to the living room and sat on the couch.I sat on the other side.He stood quiet.i couldn't take it."So uh Alex what did ya want?" He looked at me.He breathed slowly then said "Well I uh thought I'd come early.You know to get to know ya better.Before I was pretty rude." I sighed in relief and nodded."Ok,well uh want anything to eat?" he shook his head.I sighed."Ay Alex let go a little your too nervous around me.If ya got something to say just say it!" he looked at me.He nodded then said "Ashley have you heard of vampires?" I nodded."Ya undead humans that turn to bloodsucking monsters right?" He sighed."So thats what you think of them..." I don't know why but I had to make him feel betetr so I changed my answer."Ya but I mean they could probably be nice if uh they were real." Alex growled and screamed at me "BUT THEY A-" he stopped.I was tearing.He saw me and apologized.I nodded and wiped my eyes.About ten more minutes passed before the doorbell rang again.Alex got up and answered it.It was the group.When they entered they all looked at Alex.Josh laughed."Hey Alex what ya doing here so early hitting on Ashley?"

Alex grunted, "oh yeah I went at her big time" He laughed then sat back down.This time right next to me.Josh got the other side of me.I was trapped.I felt so unsomfortable.Mike got a the other sofa next to Nick.Josh looked at then at Alex who was staring out into space.He shook his head then took out some kind of homework.I looked at the homework.I opened my mouth in shock.It was in spanish.I groaned.The group looked at me then the homework I had.They all laughed.I growled at them.I tried making out words but they kept getting lost with other words.Josh saw me looking like crazy for an answer.He rolled his eyes and said "The answer is true" I looked at him.I look back at the paper."It was a true or false question?" He nodded then wne tback to doing homework.

I sighed.Then at the worst moment I had to go to the bathroom.I tried holding it.Nope I had to pee like crazy.I began breathing slowly.Alex looked at me.He raised an eyebrow.The others did the same.I couldn't bare it.I got off the couch and ran to the bathroom.After I was done I went to my room.I got a spanish dictionary then sat on my bed.I jsut realized I was real tired.I decided to lay down for a bit.Before I knew it my eyes were closed.