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The Opposite Happens Knives slicing Smooth, clean skin Blood bubbling From long jagged cuts Ropes tugging At a teens neck Help Is nowhere to be seen Hope Is thrown aside Love Doesn’t exist Tears Are everywhere Coffins Are near Suicide notes Are passed around Knives Are taken away Blood Is wiped from the skin Ropes Are cut down Help Is everywhere Hope Is near Love Is passed around Tears Are nowhere to be seen Coffins Are thrown aside Suicide notes Don’t exist

Posted by: omgpalex33 Sun Jul 12, 2009 @ 08:43pm

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~To Write Love on Her Arms... Renee's story is now yours and mine~

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emoly01
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Commented on: Sun Jul 12, 2009 @ 10:20pm


	I understand the first part about cutting and dying, but how could it be reversed? Its a really good poem, but I just don't get how it could reverse like that... Sorry, it was great, even if I don't understand a small part of the thinking behind the poem biggrin It was awesome! thumbs up RAAR, I don't have a signature! Mwahahaha! oops...

Commented on: Sun Jul 12, 2009 @ 11:11pm


	i like the turn around at the end =)

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BlueMoonHuntress
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Commented on: Sun Jul 12, 2009 @ 11:56pm


	Nicely written, It seems as though your poems have turned from sad to beginning to be happy

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