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Xelyn_X13 Wrote: BobCatHOH Wrote: Xelyn_X13 Wrote: BobCatHOH Wrote: OK, this is not a regular assignment, it is a fix of a page that was completed. This is the page as it stands now. http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v216/bobcathoh/HKSS%20manga/wip/shinobu115.jpg This is the script so you know what is going on: Quote: Scene: People walking down the church's main walkway. Shinobu walks up to a man standing next to a pew, gives him a pocket watch. Shinobu: Your son wanted me to give you that watch. Man: My son? opens watch sees a picture of the boy with him in it You've seen my son? Shinobu: Yes, he's over here points to an empty pew Shinobu: !!!! Where did he go? Man: My son died almost a year ago, in a car accident. He must have brought this watch back to me so I'd know he was OK." Shinobu has a shocked expression on her face. These are the fixes needed: 1) Top left: Shinobu walks up to a pew. That's where the father is standing. 2) The little boy looked like this: http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v216/bobcathoh/HKSS%20manga/mangapage114part2.jpg The father should look like an older version of him: http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v216/bobcathoh/HKSS%20manga/mangapage116.jpg So in all the panels where the father appears, just change his hairstyle to look like the kid's. This is how the assignment works: 1) I give you a page of script. You ask questions, I answer them. 2) You give me a sketch. 3) I then comment. 4) You implement the comments, and give me a final drawing. 5) If it passes, I give you payment (usually 90% pass on the first one, sometimes they have to be re-edited) 6) You then have a chance for another page, if u want. When can you get me the initial sketch? I'm sorry but I don't fix other peoples work. could I skip this assignment? Fine. Redraw this page then. alright then. I'll try to have it to you within a week. Awesome. Remember, make sure the father looks like an older version of the son. Xelyn Craft · Sat Apr 10, 2010 @ 04:52am · 0 Comments


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