Scarlet Roses

• Artist: Epic Dino Rawr
• Description: This is the beginning of a book I hope to someday have published.
• Date: 11/05/2008
• Tags: scarlet roses

Life for Rosealeigha is normal. Well as normal as a demon`s life can get when your surrounded by humans. Suddenly her life is thrown upside down when she is forced to move away to Lawrenceville, Georgia. But, not all hope is lost. Rosealeigha gets support from her siblings while she struggles to adjust to her new life and still keep up the allusion if being human. After her family moves, she begins meeting and befriending strange humans unlike any others she has ever met. One of those people ends up being the school`s quarterback and the hottest guy in school, Blake. Yet, as fate has it, he just has to a girlfriend who is also the cheerleading squad captain and the hottest girl in school, Jessica. Even through that, strange things keep occurring that keep bringing Blake and Rosealeigha together. Will Rosealeigha ever get the guy? Will she be able to keep her secret from him and everyone else? Will she even survive through her sibling`s betrayal?

Comments

[XxScaryDinoRawrxX]

honestly this sounds too much like twilight you even used some of the names beside Blake and spelled them differently you should try to come up with character names of your own and maybe a new plot and not to be mean but i dont think it will get published because it sounds too much like twilight

[Felinx]

Loads of other books are like this common piece of writing.
Also, look at the tenses and where this section is placed in the book. You say it is in the beginning, but I say it is more like the blurb, seeing as it is in the present tense; 'I am', and 'she is'.
Keep working on it. smile

[Felinx]

Loads of other books are like that.
Also, look at the tenses and where this section is placed in the book. You say it is in the beginning, but I say it is more like the blurb, seeing as it is in the present tense; 'I am', and 'she is'.
Keep working on it. smile

[lil_clover96]

i agree it kinda sounds like twilight

[Avulira]

Good luck getting it published, it just doesn't meet the standards, seriously have you ever met a publisher? it takes alot to impress them. Also it's to over-dramatic and it sounds like a fanfiction. My advice don't try to get it published because nobody in their right mind would read it. The type of storyline you're using has been used before and people get sick of reading the same thing over and over again, and thats when you get flamed.