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In my room brushing my hair
dazed out the window
there showed my older brother
snook down stars
out the front door
we drove away
arrived at a party
too many familiar drunk faces
all but one
dark black hair
and pail skin
looking at me
my neck hairs sticking up
blushes on my cheeks
he seemed to follow me every were
I hung around my brother
never once did we drink
time went on,
time to go home
as we left
that dark black hair man
followed me
began to worry
told my brother,
but then was gone
nothing to worry about
brother and me
talking, joking, laughing
until i seen bright lights,
witch hit us like aloud
my brother lay on the car
eyes barely open
i hured to were he lay,
but before noticed a familiar car
and someone at my door
that strange darked head man
who's eyes up close looked familiar,
but was unknown
picked me up
took me to his car
all i could thing was help
my brother
and left with me
after calling the police
my life was at stake or so i think
in an un none place
surrounded by nothing
and just awoke from a hard awful dream
or so i thought
that man
came in again he
looked even more familiar
still was unknown
"Annabell he said'
he is wrong its Bellanne
confused and dazed he
said you don't remember me
my sweet love
my sweet flower
that lit my world
tell you found a cure
from this pray of night
this monster this beast
but you promised me in
your seventeens
once again
we could unite
it was not clear part of me
new he was right
my heart being in a different
place decided to return to my brother
but stood no chance
maybe a name would
change things
Edward Vol-tree
my life was turned
i was someone else
Annabell
- by Princesses Allelujah |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/12/2009 |
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- Title: hearts Diary
- Artist: Princesses Allelujah
- Description: it about a lost love between vampires and one being human again or what ever you think it means to you i am not a crepe its not attended to be creepy it attended to be a vampire poem but not that good of one but a good lost love story
- Date: 01/12/2009
- Tags: hearts diary
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Comments (4 Comments)
- RandomRemark - 01/28/2009
- /you sorta copied this from Stephanie Meyer's book Twilight. You even named the vampire Edward, you only changed the last name from Cullen to Vol-tree. And you named the human Annabell instead of Isabella. Try to be more original instead of stealing ideas from books.
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- xX_vampiregothicwoman_Xx - 01/14/2009
- GO VAMPIRES THEY RULE some other supernatural creatures rule to but VAMPIRES ARE BETTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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- iluvpolkadots - 01/12/2009
- Okay this is unorganized. Un-checked. You could tell you didnt proof read. stare
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- Moonlight_Maiden123 - 01/12/2009
- hehe cool, i luv stories like this ^^ go vampires!
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