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I will write as much as I can, About anything mostly poems, which I haven't put up in quite some time.
The Last Words


He's on the bed, while shes holding on to him.
She's crying telling him to hang on just a bit longer.
He tries Speaking, but no words come out.

She tries to figure out what hes trying to tell her.
But still nothing comes to mind.
She hugs him in a big embrace.


As he closes his eyes, his life flashes before him.
He sees the girl that he fell in love with.
The first time they locked in the throes of a passionate kiss.


As his life comes to a final close, He remembers
the girls enlightening smile.
The way she would talk to him,as if no-one was there.

He finally speaks,and says to the crying girl.
I love you and always will.
And thoes were the lovers last words.






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Rigor_V
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commentCommented on: Sat Jul 07, 2007 @ 04:04am
This is breath-taking!! I really love it!! You are a great writer!!


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