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Wild Monkeys and Apes Ahead. Continue bewarned.

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Currently Unnamed Melting me Inside; It's what you're doing to me You've forgotten pain Gone totally numb Don't hit my anymore, I'm not a target I love you, I really do, But you keep hitting me, And pushing me A flower Crumbling under a Boot Figure it out-- I'm hurting! You've forgotten pain, Gone totally numb You're plucking the petals From my heart, One last tug-- And I don't know if I'll Crumble or live. [.Rikocette.Echoes.] · Sun May 08, 2005 @ 06:19pm · 9 Comments


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	Fine. I'll comment. Overall, it's very spiffy. But on the 14th line I think you could use a better word. But I don't know what would be better, so you could keep it. The 6th line is "my" instead of "me" as it should be. That's it. It' s awesome. You rock. 3nodding Offline ~Yo-San~ · Community Member · Mon May 09, 2005 @ 01:09am


	Thank you! ^_^- I know, some mistakes, but bleh. xp D; shall fix them later Offline [.Rikocette.Echoes.] · Community Member · Mon May 09, 2005 @ 01:12am


	also a good poem... random question, have you ever had 7-up so cold it gave you brain freeze? Offline Magic Missile · Community Member · Mon May 09, 2005 @ 12:20pm


	Frappuchinos give me brain freeze when I drink them too fast. So do Slurpees. whee Offline ~Yo-San~ · Community Member · Tue May 10, 2005 @ 01:28am


	orange mochha frappuchino!!!! Offline Magic Missile · Community Member · Fri May 13, 2005 @ 11:38am


	o.o I've got strange friends. Offline [.Rikocette.Echoes.] · Community Member · Fri May 13, 2005 @ 09:55pm


	what? you've never seen zoolander? Offline Magic Missile · Community Member · Fri May 13, 2005 @ 10:45pm


	... I don't think so. : Offline [.Rikocette.Echoes.] · Community Member · Sat May 14, 2005 @ 12:34am


	that's the second coolest random movie i've ever seen! Offline Magic Missile · Community Member · Sat May 14, 2005 @ 04:13am

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