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the map to pen island
*dun dun DUNNNNN*
new poem(no name yet)FIXED!
Winter gust blows through my veins,
Chilling me to the bone.
I am not sure how far from home I am,
Why am I always alone?

The nighttime sky above me,
stars and moon give me light.
I walk this street with a broken heart,
No one wants in their sight.

*My lips are red from the cold,
skin as white as snow.
Eyes bloodshot from crying before,
I don't know where to go.*

I want to see your face one last time,
To see your eyes sparkle in the sun.
But I fear you will be disappointed,
When you learn what I have done.

I leave this town and you behind,
This night so close to dawn.
For I love you, but you love him,
And time keeps passing on.

EDIT:i cant find the real poem
so ill re-edit this soon

EDIT2: found the original paper;
added in the missing stanza.






User Comments: [4]
Son Alex
Community Member





Sat Sep 01, 2007 @ 04:16pm


TROGDOR!!!


comicfan92
Community Member





Sat Sep 01, 2007 @ 11:10pm


good. i see this one rhymes too!


Glinka
Community Member





Sun Sep 02, 2007 @ 08:57pm


WOE!! So sad but so pure words.......
Is it about loneliness and not being able to have the on u love or something??


Hersheydudette
Community Member





Tue Sep 18, 2007 @ 03:16am


Ooo ish rhyming! Good job! mrgreen 3nodding


User Comments: [4]
 
 
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