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Ill be writing about my feeling maybe some of my poems and wat will happen interesting in my life!!
I had this poem long ago for Naruto fans and those who like SasuSaku anti fans dont read it!!!!Tip sad listen to saddnes and sorrow from naruto when read it)
"Why now Sasuke?"(to Sasuke, from Sakura)

Do you love me?
Will you ever take those cold eyes off me?
Will you ever smile when im with you?
How can i live without you?
You say you should be alone,
You say you hate me,
You say you can live without me,
Can you?
Are your words the truth?
Will you be fine?
While i hold this kunai to my heart?
Will you just laught?
As i bring it closer,wat will you do?
The coldness touchess my skin and i feel pain,
Are you just looking away,
Thinking you dont care,
As i gasp in pain,
I fall to my knees,
Blood over my body,
Over the ground,
Your warm arms around me?
Painfull tears on my shoulder,
Are you there?
Are you holding me tight?
Trying to stop the blood?
Trying to save me?
Why?
Why now?
Blood covers your hands but nothing,
You dont wipe them,
You just stare at my face,
Those familiar cold eyes gone,
Sad,lonely ones replace them,
When you told me you had no need for my love,i did not cry,
I grabbed this bloody weapon and put it to my broken heart,
Without you i found no reason to live,
But now,why?
Why do you cry?
Are those tears for me?
This moment,
All you do is whisper those words i had confessed not long ago,
You kiss me,
My body dosent move,
Yet you knew i felt it,
You are my only regret,My sinful thought,
My Sasuke,
My Beloved!






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Darxies
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commentCommented on: Sun Nov 04, 2007 @ 01:11pm
Wat ya think pplWat ya think ppl?! 3nodding


commentCommented on: Sun Nov 04, 2007 @ 01:26pm
nice very nice smile



Lord Richard LeBrun
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Ex-Zacky
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commentCommented on: Sun Nov 04, 2007 @ 01:35pm
so long >_< @_@ confused >_<


commentCommented on: Sun Nov 04, 2007 @ 01:40pm
heart I love it!!!!!!! n_n

so....... touching.........


hehehehehhe.......... heart



may_ken12
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Darxies
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commentCommented on: Sun Nov 04, 2007 @ 01:45pm
THanks guys for commenting!!


commentCommented on: Mon Nov 05, 2007 @ 02:54pm
its very good,un ^^ i like it...i never knew u can write poems,un



XxxDeidara-SenpaixxX
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