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The things that live in my head.
I have little ideas in my head. Many of them are fed by my overactive imagination and grow and take on a life of their own. Usually they die off after a while, but I'm getting kinda tired of that. Feel free to comment, it builds their character.
The Hammer Pt.3: The Hand that Wields It.
(part 2 is here. part one linked from there)

The beast rose, and the hammer fell. The flames blazed, and the hammer fell. The crowd parted, and the man stepped forward. In his hand, he held the hammer, in his presence, people stared in awe. He was justice, he was the law, but few remembered he was still just a man. Days past, months past, years past, all the while the crowd was there. All the while he held the hammer, he dealt out punishment, he kept the peace. So rarely was he able to join the crowd, his duty called too often. When he could join the crowd as one of their own, his weapon, ever present, was always the first thing they saw, his words, his presence distorted by it. Maybe that was why he changed. Maybe it was simply the power the hammer held. Whatever the reason, as time passed, punishment came faster. The beast didn't need to rise before the hammer fell, the flames were barely a spark before the hammer fell. And then it happened. For no reason, the hammer fell. And again, and again. He'd gone mad. People shouted to stop, cried injustice for those he'd struck, and on them the hammer fell. People ran, cowered before him, but still the hammer fell. He was justice, he was the law, who were they to argue? He held the hammer, and he would use it. A man stepped forward and fell to his knees. He begged for justice, begged for this to stop. The hammer rose. The man pleaded, and the hammer fell. The man remained, still on his knees. Before him there was no longer the one who held the hammer. It lay alone on the ground. Even the one who holds the hammer is not immune, proven by the sign that glowed where he had been. b&.






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banner3
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commentCommented on: Wed Feb 06, 2008 @ 03:29am
Deep dude. Deep. I love it.


commentCommented on: Sat May 31, 2008 @ 01:02pm
Not bad at all biggrin



Dreamer of Xing Xing
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PernRider480
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commentCommented on: Sun Jun 15, 2008 @ 10:33pm
I love this! Well written, well thought out, awesome use of imagery! The metaphor is great, too ...

Keep it up! I definitely think I'm gonna subscribe ...


commentCommented on: Sat Jul 19, 2008 @ 09:50pm
I fugin h8 you.



Esoteric Majnun
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