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Oscuro
Chapter 1

"Dad? Dad! Where are you?" Odio walked around the little house. She brushed her short black hair out of her face and sighed. "That b*****d. Dad?!" She slamed her foot down onto the ground and cluched her fist. Her white fur stood up and her blue eyes glowed.

Enfando Frio and Odio Frio lived out in the middle of Pradera Hermosa. It was exactly as the name meant. Beautiful Meadow. When it snowed it covered everypart of the land and the only thing that was spotted was the small little meadow. In the spring it was filled with the most beautiful flowers. If they were lucky at night when the rest of the world is sleeping the flowers would turn a bright blue. Bluer than the sky. Odio loved it there. It was the only thing that calmed her from her father.

She turned to the house and stepped in. "Dad? Are you in here?" It was a strange thing for him not to be outside waiting for her to come home from school.
Something slithered past her foot causing her to jump. The black body of the creature slithered under her and then onto the tip of the table.

"Damn it Muerta!" she screamed reaching for her chest.
"Hehehe, I love seeing you jump like that." The small dark ghost grinned.
"You suck, Do you know that? You little cat wannabe!" she hissed at him.
"Cat?! How dare you call me one of those furball coughing assholes?! Just you wait till tonight!" He barked at her. If there was one thing that pissed Muerta off it was being called a Cat when in fact he was a Dog.

Odio grinned. "You sure are scary at night. I can barely sleep when you spend the night. Speaking of night." She went to the fridge and grabbed a bottle of water. "Did you and Daddy get anything accomplished last night?" She raised an eyebrow as she lifted the bottle of water to her mouth.
Muerta let a huge smile appear on his face. "You should be seeing the results of what we have acheived soon."
Odio's mouth dropped with amazement. "Really?! That's great! Where is he? I have to see!" She stood up and looked around the room and then headed down the stairs. "Dad?" She looked around the huge lab in the basement and looked at many different viles filled with the energy he had been researching. The fox in her made her very curious to know what the dark purple energy was.

"Odio?"
She jumped at the sudden voice and turned around to see her father. His glasses glared with the little light in the room giving her a shiver. He allways looked scary that way. When he stepped into the light his grey fur could be seen and his red eyes stared down at her. Grey strips went down his eyes sending a eery feeling to his glare. His hair was long and blacked, tinged with grey and held in a ponytail.

"Oh! Hey Dad!" she grinned and hugged him. "You had me worried. You weren't outside like usual." She pouted and her black ears went down.
"I-I'm sorry. I'll never do that again." he grinned. His fox tail wrapped around hers and he put his arms around her.
"Dad! Is it true?!" she realeased from him and wagged her tail. "Are you allmost finished with her expeiriment?!"
Enfando flinched a bit and then he smiled nervously. "Well, not exactly. I have alot I have to research on Oscuro, but i have come to a hypothesis I need to expeirment."
"Really? And what's that, May I ask?" She leaned her head to the side in curiosity.
Enfando grinned. "I can't say." He turned his back and started down the lab. Odio followed after him. "Odio, have I told you what Oscuro energy is?"
"Oscuro? Hmmm.....I think its dark energy isn't it? And it's allso its what Muerta made of. Am i correct?"
"Exactly. You have learned so much." He turned and petted her head. "Muerta is a Monstruo Oscuro. Also known as a Oscuro-mon for short. They are created when evil beings die."

"What did Muerta do?" she couldn't imagine the creature doing anything bad. Expecially since she allways played with him when she was little.
"He was a murder. He killed families and even children, Odio. I know its hard for you to understand but bare with me. Me and him made a deal when you were born. That he will help me with my expeiraments in exchange for him to have fun. He loves nothing but pain and misery."
"Dad....Why would you do such a thing?" she shook in fear. "Dad....."

"Odio, he gives me Oscuro. Without it I can't expeirament. I have no choice." he smiled. "But I've gotten to far to stop. I have done plenty of research to realize what Oscuro can do. I have done so much. I must keep going. I begged Muerta for all of this! I cannot stop!" He turned tords her and put lifted his hand to see his watch. He strided over to Odio and put his hands on her shoulders. "Odio.....I need you..." he whispered.
"Dad....Your scaring me...." she cringed. "What are you doing?! What are you saying?!"

His blood red eyes dug in her blue. Sucking out her soul. She soon felt the dark creature wrap around her and hold her still.
"He begged me to help him Odio. No hard feelings, huh?" His dark eyes peirced as his sharp tooth smile widened.

She tried to break away from the dark monster but couldn't escape. "Dad!? Dad! What are you doing?! Please! Don't do this!!!" she screamed as Muerta slammed her onto the table. Enfando walked around the table and strapped her down.
"Odio, My sweet little girl. You will forgive me. Won't you? It will only hurt for a little while. I have done it before but this time, it will be flawless." his red eyes ran over her.
"Daddy....Why me? Why this?!" she closed her blue eyes. Tears streamed down her stripes in pain.

Muerta hit a switch raising the table to where she was leaning over. The lightblue lights of the room vanished showing a glow of purple from under the sheets infront of her. The sheet finally came off showing of a drill with many wires expelling. It was like a giant needle. She squinted her eyes and realized the machine was filled with Oscuro. "NO! No Daddy! You can't!" she pleaded. "I'm you own daughter! Your own flesh and blood! Please!" she cried as the machine started up and the needle at the end came closer. Muerta's dark body slithered out the window with a smile. His body barly made it through the small window. "Muerta! Wait! Help me!" she screamed.She turned back to the machine as it peirced through her heart. Her screams filled the room.

Enfando watched with awe and amazement at her. Her white artic fox fur started turning grey just as his. "A common reaction of Oscuro. Same happened to me when I was first exposed." he grinned but it slowly faded as his fingers copy down notes onto his notebook. "Her eyes....There turning purple. Most be another reaction of the energy. This is much different then putting it into bone."

Suddenly the machine started shaking. Odio's eyes began to expel the energy. Her arms and legs broke free from the straps as she started to reach for the machine. She picked it up and slung it across the room. Her body was covered with the energy. She looked at her father who was gathering his notes in one final attempt to keep his research. She jumped in front of him and slamed his head onto the ground.

A smile appeared across her face as she pushed down onto his neck stranggleing him. Bit suddenly she felt the cold slice of a blade into her stomach. A scalpule ripped into her and came out. Her body fell down next to Enfando. He shook in fear and picked her up. "Odio....Odio?...." he held her head to his chest and looked around. "Damn it!" he screamed. "I can't let anyone know of this." He picked her up and ran up the stairs. "I killed her...I destroyed my own daughter!" he screamed running out of his house and throwing her into the passenger seat of his car. He slamed the door shut and tried to breathe.

His sobs soon became chuckles. He then tilted his head back and started to laugh like a madman. "My God! That felt so ******** good! I never knew what it felt like to kill! To make suffering! I want to increase this! I want to destroy so much more! I want to use this energy to destroy this world! I never knew I want to become master of these ghastley people! The adrinaline was so much! I never felt anything like it!" He shouted in enjoyment. He shouted and laughed and even started to twirl in circles in the rain. His lab coat was covered in blood which started to wash away into the ground. "¡Soy el rey oscuro!"

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Olivia helped me get the courage to write it up. I still have alot I need to think about so bare with me. Keep in mind. I created EVERYTHING in this. And there is still more to come.
The last line reads:I am the dark king! in spanish.
All of this belongs to me!!!! MEMEMEMEMEMEMEMEME!!!
Mitzi Marcello!






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Katze Wachter
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commentCommented on: Tue Dec 11, 2007 @ 11:32pm
Wow, I nag you into writing it, and you call me a furball coughing a*****e?
Cats have more intelect than a dog ever will, and it's scientifically proven... stare
But, good chappie! I like it, so keep it up!!


commentCommented on: Tue Dec 11, 2007 @ 11:35pm
lol, i like cats but i like dogs much more. Besides, its was him. It was all muerta. He hates being mistaken for a cat. XD



Blitzbitz
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