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just a story......
the sand started to rumble. it was piling in to huge mountains over ray. ray struggled to get out of the way. then a huge pair of teeth rose from the sand. the were shining ivory and crimson blood dripped from the rotted holes. the blood shined in the desert sun. there were also corpses stuck inside them. the rotted corpses stench could be smelled from miles away. the stench was almost a solid. it poured out of it's mouth in a green fog. the creature's one eye stared at ray. the pupil was bleeding from a past scar of battle. ray walked backward as the creature started to rise. even before it sstarted to rise it was a mile tall now it was going down into the ground right above ray. ray dodged with great speed. the creature continued to go under till it was completely submereged. now the creature was below ray. ray was looking for a sign of where the creature was but with no luck. sudenly teeth jetted around him and he fell down the blood coated throat. he thought fast and grabbed a bone that was jetting out of it's throught. the creature then lyed down and ray dropped down. ray then thought of the journey that got him there.

to be continued



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User Comments: [2]
nepheal
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Mon Dec 17, 2007 @ 10:30pm


U forgot capitals too ^^;;; I think u need someone to revise that since well not everything makes sence. -_-;;;


old man urahara
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Tue Dec 18, 2007 @ 12:18am


ehh i got bored so i wrote it so screw your mom y don't ya


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