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CHAPTER ONE: the entire 1st chapter ( its finally finished )
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BLOOD ROMANCE


Chapter one is a bit weird...so... well this story is the...um............IDK!!! i cnt remember how many fanfics ive writen sweatdrop but any. any way this story has some VERY strong language and some semi-sexual scenes so reader descresion is advised mrgreen other than that...ENJOY!!



(GIMMIE A MINUTE PLZ sweatdrop )

okay, im back...now you really can enjoy....



I couldnt breath......It felt like i was being caried away by a force that wanted to kill me... i was sure that i was going to die. then... i was being caried away by strong arms wraped around me. I heard the voice of...a...CHILD????? I opened my eyes swiftly but couldnt see anything but water..."HEY YOU ALIVE!!! YOU ALIVE!!!" yea thats a little boy, but how could a little boy be carrying me? i heard another voice in the mix of it all: "well tobi it seems youve brought me lunch" his voice sounded terrible and seriouse.."WHAT? NOOOO!!! YOU CANT HAVE HER!!! TOBI WAS A GOOD BOY AND FOUND HER JUST LIKE LEADER-SAMA TOLD ME TOO!!!!!"
"HEY!! shut up im trying to concentrate on my art, un!!" this time i could see that person that said that. it was a woman with blonde hair and a bang over her left eye...i wonderd why she sounded like a man?? confused . the next person to walk up to us was a man with silver-white hair, and, i hadn't noticed before, the same type of over coat as the others...they all had on the same outfit?? i saw the one with the terrible voice. he highly resembled a chess board that had merged with a venus fly trap..."anyway who cares what leader said!! im hungry--" then tobi cut him off.
"ZETSU, IF YOU TOUCH HER I'LL KILL YOU" evil

* Its not the entire chapter one but isnt that a wonderful cliffhanger ^_^*





What happened to that innocent sounding little boy a momment ago?? " HAHA!! JUS PLAYIN ZETSU!!"--THERE HE IS-- "Well now tobi finally found that little bitc--i mean finaly found that girl" i saw a man walk over and lean directly over me. He had blue skin and blue hair with gills on hi face... I managed to speak..." wha-where am i"
"shes alive thats good i needed a new sacrifice--" said the on with the silver hair>
"N-no not that! tobi will do anything as long an Hidan promises not to hurt her!" he, hidan, stared at me and i asked the question again. "where am i and why do i feel like ive seen you all before?" I felt tobi walk away and then entered a house. "tobi?...welcome back , idiot" this time a girl with blue (or black) hair and a oragami flower behind her ear. i looked around and noticed that they all wore black cloaks with red clouds on them. tobi placed me on the couch and i felt cold due to the wetness of my clothing... i closed my eyes. "tobi! diedara! lets go we have some things we need to take care of" this new person-- i couldnt see his face but i could tell that his voice was full of pain and anguish. tobi and the girl with the blonde hair spoke at once..." YES, LEADER-SAMA"
I turned to see tobi stareing down hidan. leader-sama interferred in there face-off. " hidan, dont do anything that will get you killed." i was allmost fully awake now.by then the others had left. I bounced as hidan sat on the couch..." you look cold... do you need any thing? ya'know like... for me too undress you twisted " i could barely speak but i managed... "n-no im okay. im used to it by now" i lied...
"keep your hands to yourself..." said zetsu " dont worry chess peice... i wont do anything that would get me killed"...Zetsu, the blue guy, and that woman all walked out of the room leaving me with hidan sad ..." whats your name?"
"k-kamai" his expresion went from miscevious to shocked. "y-your ichi's kid arent you??? surprised "h-how do you know my mother?" he smirked " hm. every one knows the infamous 'ICHI THE DIVIANT' the one that started the thirst of your clan--"
"SHUT UP!!! DON'T YOU EVER CALL IT THAT AGAIN!!!" i was still weak and my outburst only made it worse. Hidan smirked and removed a pendant from around his neck and unbuttoned his, allready halfway unbuttoned, claok. he stroked my cheek and with his thum over my lips. i didnt have enough energy to slap him like i usually would in situations like this, he kissed my neck while carresing my legs. i felt overly discusted as he touched my body unenvited. " i know that your clan has to drink blood in order to sustain their life force..." he kissed my neck while he took a kunai across his neck slightly causing a little blood to drip onto my shirt. "please dont make me do this..." i pleaded. he only laughed and moved directly over me.
as so a bit ov his blood driped onto my lips and sent me over the edge. my dark brown eyes turned to crimson and i lunged at him grasping him in my arms ad pulling his neck to my mouth."ah- ahh!" escaped his lips and i couldnt help but wonder if what i was doing was actually enjoyable for him...."DAMNIT, BITE ME HARDER!!!!!" He yelled and i obliged...another maon came from him and i realized that me atackimg his body WAS pleasurable. hidan carresed my body from my sides to my hips and then my thighs. he moaned yet again and i began, besides my beter judgement, started to grind my hips to his...i heard foot steps. and then
" damn, Hidan you cant go ten minutes without sacrificing yourself, can you?"
i immidiately pushed him into the armrest on the OTHER side of the couch.
"DONT YOU EVER DO THAT TO ME EVER AGAIN YOU NARSASISTIC JACKASS SUNAVA b***h!!!" I screamed with my regained strenghth.Hidan just laughed "hehe. well kakuzu looks like i just found another follower of jashin"...



TO BE CONTINUED






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Takashix14
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commentCommented on: Tue Feb 19, 2008 @ 12:19am
its pretty good, even though i never read it b4!lol


commentCommented on: Wed Mar 19, 2008 @ 03:46pm
awesome story =D



Darkrenji9
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