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Well, I got bored so I decided to write an original fiction. An original fiction is a story of which you have your own created characters in your own story. Well, this fiction of mine revolves around two of my characters, Zeki and Vail Spitzkreig. This is about how they met. =) Happy reading! I'm gonna make part two later.



It was at that rainy day…. I found him. I and my dad were walking down the road towards home.

My name’s Zeki, Zeki Spitzkrieg. I’m a red-head, short-tempered brat who loves playing with fire, call me a pyromaniac. I live with my dad in an apartment. My mom…. well…. she died long ago when I was about 3, and now I’m 8. My dad said my mom was really good at taking good care of me. He said that I was a handful. Haha… he can’t handle me that well. I’ve always longed for someone to talk to, besides my dad. Someone like… a brother. My dad’s too busy to even look for women. On days he would go to work, I’m left all alone in my room, watching outside my window. ‘How boring’ I thought to myself. ‘Jeez…. I want something amazing to happen! tch, if only I had someone to talk to…..’ I lit up my lighter on and off.

By that time… I didn’t know… someone out there was waiting for me to find him.

My dad came home early. He flopped on the couch and called me.

“Zeki! Come over here! Wanna go shopping with me?”

“Dad….. shopping is for girls. crying ”

“I meant shopping for groceries. We might even buy that special wasabi you want.”

“Ok ok! count me in!”

I raced upstairs to get dressed. I got my backpack with lots of stuff. Of course, I brought an umbrella just in case it’s gonna rain. I hate the rain. I hate how it makes me wet and cold. I hate how it drops to my face….. I just hate it.

“Zeki hurry up! Or I’m gonna leave without you!”

“Jeez I’m coming Pops!”

And so we left. We bought a lot of stuff in the supermarket. There were tons and tons of stuff in there! There were toaster ovens, food, pans, food, plates, food, and more food! Well, after we bought the groceries, and I even let my dad buy another lighter for me, we started heading home. It began to drizzle. Thank goodness I brought my umbrella. We’re almost near out apartment when I saw some people in an alley. I don’t really know what they’re doing but all I can see is that they were kicking something. I see a punk with a nose pierce, a guy with a Mohawk, and a shady looking guy uh… more like an emo. When I looked closer it was a boy! ‘What the hell?! Why are they doing that?! I gotta stop them!’ I rushed to that alley and began to shield the boy. The punks stopped and snarled at me.

“Get out of the way brat or we’ll hurt you too!”

“Look kid, this ain’t you’re business now move!”

They took me by the arm and dragged me out. The boy looked around and then I noticed he was blind. This got me enraged. How could they treat someone so weak that way! I rushed in back again and gave a good punch to the guy with a nose pierce. I was knocked down by the emo guy. Just then my dad rushed in and punched the emo guy square in the face! My dad was surrounded by the punks while I was beside the blind boy. I felt him shivering in fear and cold. My dad was really good in fighting those punks. Heck, they didn’t even touch him!

“Let’s blow this joint boss! We’ll get the kid later!” The punks ran off. Ha! That’s it, run for your lives ‘ya lowlifes! Well…. the groceries were all wet. The blind boy was still scared. My dad gave him his jacket. A thought came in my mind. ‘Why don’t we adopt him?’

“Hey…. where do you live?” I asked the blind boy. He didn’t answer.

“Why don’t you come live with us for awhile?” I asked again. He rose his head and gave a weak smile. I looked at my dad.

“Well, since we found him and all and I doubt he’s gonna talk under the rain…” My dad answered.

I smiled at him and so I took the boys hand and we headed home. ‘Great! Now I have someone to talk to! Uh… eventually.’



Soooo part two will be a bit later. So what do you guys think of the introduction? 3nodding