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때때로, 그녀는 당신이 누구와 다시 사랑에 빠진지 미소하고, 처럼 봅니다
This journal is adorable; Not that anyone still reads it
I've glanced over all my older pieces, and I find it really childish writing.

The apathy is there--blunt and lucid--but more importantly, an unnecessary amount of self pity seems to be present in every post.

It's as if I've lived my life in a little cardboard box, and everybody's against me in life.

I might as well be dirt poor, be bald, have only one arm, and possess only one functional eye.

And be an orphan.

But I'm not. I'm none of those things above. Which is why I feel that as a writer, I've really been quite a failure in the past.






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Miss~Chihiro
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commentCommented on: Fri Jan 23, 2009 @ 07:13pm
Then try to improve, sunshine.

Not everybody gets it on the first try.
Or the second.
Or the third.

You fall, get back up.

Don't quit.
You're fine.


commentCommented on: Thu Jan 29, 2009 @ 04:38am
You'll improve, it takes time. Writers need some constructive criticism to know what works well for them and what doesn't. Just find some close people who have the time to read your work and who can still remove themselves from the equation to tell you what really needs to be done. Do this, and your writing will improve, for sure.



Winged Dominatrix
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Sheep Have Ears
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commentCommented on: Sat Jan 31, 2009 @ 04:49am
Your journal isn't childish; it's amazing.
What you write for me isn't about childish things, it's all about the little things that you see and choose to write.
You are the best critic of your work so if you do think that you are doing bad, give time to improve.
Compared with my journal, your journal is AWESOME.


commentCommented on: Thu Mar 05, 2009 @ 02:49am
Everyone has to start somewhere. No one can start out with amazing writing [unless they hide it]. If you think it's childish, your writing now must be even more amazing.


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tokimochi
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