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waiting for something that u will never know...
thinking about something that will never be....
wishing for a dream that will never come true...
shedding tears for no reason, nobody....
all of what you know is a lie...
what can change this existence?
will anyone ever know, find out?
nothing goes as planed...
and as nothing, something comes about...
Can someone or something ever free me from this grasp...
this grasp of darkness, this sheet of which surrounding me...
taking me away from the one thing I wait for...
search for...
wanting to see the truth...
wanting to be pure...
being in cased in darkness...
the darkness of this day will not age...
nothing can be the same...
after its changed...
it cant ever be the same...




i dont know how to continue it..... if ne1 has nething tht may help plz comment!
also 2 pple have helped me with this!^^ zach and will ^^ the last part they mainly did^^ and i thank thm both! ^^






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Zoxre
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commentCommented on: Wed Oct 29, 2008 @ 03:27am
^-^ I don't think it need to be continued.....it pretty much leaves the reader wishing for more....as do most poems....


commentCommented on: Mon Jan 26, 2009 @ 06:10pm
this one looks great as it iz like the other guy said keeps the reader wishing for more 3nodding awesome



xFallen-Shadow-Wolfx
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