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We had to make a thing for english, a kind of poem about 'our life'
i made 2, and i really want to know what you think about it! :]

Our life is like a race,
a race against time.
Which we all will lose in the end.
But only when we get to the finish,
We will know if we have won.

Our life is like a candle,
Shining bright in the darkness,
giving warmth to them who need it
but with one deep sigh,
it can all be over






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iSugarita
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commentCommented on: Sun Nov 09, 2008 @ 07:37pm
nicey heart ^^


commentCommented on: Sat Nov 15, 2008 @ 07:16pm
They are both amazing

But the second one has more meaing to me



Dreams Wishes Nightmares
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AnonymousGuitarist
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commentCommented on: Mon Dec 29, 2008 @ 03:46am
Its great...good poetry...yet your english teacher would probably be like wdf.


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