Well so far so good, I guess I should say. I'm getting some people in this book, it's an intention with this character. And seeing that a lot pay attention to fiction, a** kicking, big swords, fighting, *Please insert one extra thing to continue* action. So where else to put in a piece of the work then on the arena.
That's right I put a bit of the heroes fight against silver aliens, I know it says monsters but trust me it's from the teens point of view. and I'm hoping to get comments on where it lacks, where it's good, and what wasn't understood. So check out Reality Crisis preview and leave a comment if you wish. key words to use realitycrisis, Torren, Zack
Now down to why I blog the past few days. I had all day to think about it and I think I made the right choice when I wanted to talk about Zakuren/Cal and mentioned the Titanic. See this disaster was a man made one, how some may ask, there's research to believe that the ship wouldn't have lasted to long anyways. Another thing was I love Titanic, and no not the romance movie, I only watched the sinking and Jack getting frozen to death. Those were my favorite parts. rofl
I don't want to say to much but if I don't then many of you would think writing five chapters about one ship is a waste of time cause when it ends it ends, who cares, move on. Since I watched to many documentries on this one ship I was able to create a battleground that not only could be a grave, but you could cause the damage and it would turn out just how it sank, example the ship being split, experts found the reason why it did crack in two but I thought of a more destructive way, and it does involve Zack, as a matter in fact the spotlight is mostly on Zack durring the whole sinking.
In Dark World Zack and teammate Dan Tyson, heir to a lot of cash, or was, almost escaped. Dan, who is able to fly, drops Zack after getting hit in the back by the staircase while the ship is tilted up and going down for the last time. Everyone thinks Zack's dead but turns out to be alive and evil.
Rise and Fall of the Red moon, A.K.A. book three, Zack returns due to his memory being wiped by the bad guys and wants to seek out the truth since the last thing he can remember was being dropped by Dan. The second time around Zack faces the past self that ends up dieing by his own hands and is taken out of reality, a paradox if you will. And like I mentioned before the evil Zack destroys half the ship just looking for the one answer and ends up destroying the one thing that bonded him to the former reality.
Well leave a comment if you will, I like to chat so leave a message if confused and I'll get to you. Also feel free to mention stuff you would maybe interested in for topics on the journals. The next topic is the Scientist Seth and his army of geneticly mutated people. Lets just say a lot are roaming around here. Until then take care
~M.T.
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