Final Fantasy VI
The Return.
One day Locke who is a thief/treasure hunter decided to do some training in the forest. But as he was walking towardes the door he had a bad feeling that something was totally wrong. He drew his weapons which were two swords that he called the Atma Weapon and the Ultima sword. Weapons in hand he started to look around his home, he didn't see anything not even his wife Celes
He called her name but no response, thats when he noticed the letter lying on the floor. Locke took one last look before picking up the letter and opening it up...He was shocked at what it said.
To Locke:
I hope this finds you well. I have your wife captive in my dungeon, and I will kill her if you don't do what I say.
Locke paused for a moment before reading the rest...
Come to the Fire Mountains alone and un-armed. Just you and nobody else or she will die.
PS: By the way I didn't introduce myself. I'm somebody you belived to be dead
Ha Ha Ha.....
KEFKA
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Just work on the punctuation, and also try to make the letter stand out.
Here's my version:
The Return.
He called her name but there was no response, that's when he noticed the letter lying on the floor. Locke took one last look around before he picked up the letter and opened it...
He was shocked at what it said:
To Locke:
I hope this letter finds you well. I have your wife captive in my dungeon, and I will kill her if you don't do as I say.
Come to the Fire Mountains alone and un-armed. Just you and nobody else or she will die.
P.S.
By the way - I didn't introduce myself.
I'm somebody you belived to be dead
Ha Ha Ha.....
KEFKA