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Rachael's Journal
Poems and Random Thoughts
Broken
What are you supposed to say?
What are you supposed to do?
When the life you've known
is falling down around you?

Do you break down and cry?
Comfort your loved ones?
Oh, but better not take a side
They'll take out the big guns

They'll scream and shout
they'll break doors and throw rings
they make you feel guilty
and from you they epect impossible things

One will leave
despite your efforts
they run away from their pains
no matter who it hurts

But they can not live this way
they feel miserable
they are crumbling in this life
their spirits decay


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  • User Comments: [1]
    Spyceh
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    Sat Aug 15, 2009 @ 03:13am


    So easy to connect to, but theres one part.. rather one word that seems out of place

    "they'll argue and rant"

    To me the word rant doesn't fit there. It sorta sticks out.
    I'm not exactly sure what word to replace it with, but I'm sure you'll find something better.

    Otherwise I loved it ^.^


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