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A day in the life of Princess Orphelia
I wanted to share another Poem with you.
Please let me know what you think?




I'll step aside



It's a little bit harder
than l thought it would be
to put into words
what's inside of me.

These feelings are crazy
and all too confused
but that's how it is
when my heart's been abused.

l find that each day
brings a new point of view
and l'm constantly changing
my image of you.

There are times when l feel
that l don't give a damn
for l'm better off being
alone as l am.

Then my attitude sways
as weeks go on by
and the thought of you leaving
compels me to cry.

and sometimes l seethe
with anger inside
wishing on you
all the tears that l cried.

lt leaves me bewildered
not knowing for sure
lf l have the heart
to love anymore.

For you left me a heart
that's a bottomless pit
and no longer holds love
inside of it.

So if that's the way
that you want it to be
then I'll step aside
and let you go free.

©2008-2009 ~Princess-Orphelia

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  • User Comments: [7]
    AortaV
    Community Member





    Wed Nov 18, 2009 @ 10:45am


    woa! this one is amazing!


    Chatons
    Community Member





    Wed Nov 18, 2009 @ 05:00pm


    Oh it's lovely!

    I mean, I don't read a lot of poetry, but I do think this is good. 3nodding


    brilliantbluestar_0
    Community Member





    Thu Nov 19, 2009 @ 02:45am


    Wow! Like the other person said, Amazing ^-^ My heart pours out to you in hopes it will again feel love like your personality and attitude and kindness you show towards everyone else heart You have a gift in putting your feelings into a poem format!


    rossalie37
    Community Member





    Sun Nov 22, 2009 @ 03:58am


    this is the awesomest poem ive ever read!!! its really deep!!! and its really true!!! i just love it!!! rofl lol its really GOOD!!!!


    Shin_Ru
    Community Member





    Mon Nov 23, 2009 @ 04:09pm


    It sure isn't bad. Seems like you have a lot of pent up agression towards an old lover.
    Beautiful poem.


    Akikusa Shintaro
    Community Member





    Sun Nov 29, 2009 @ 03:57am


    Very touching, I think this came from your heart, and feeling you may have in your past. I hope things get better for you! biggrin


    Christine Dixon
    Community Member





    Thu Dec 03, 2009 @ 08:41am


    I love this! So full of feelings. <33


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