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THIS NAME SHALL NOT BE NAMED
Meep
Poem
~Silence~

Tears were streaming down her face,
As the moon-lit sky shimmers above,
She looks down in sorrow,
At such a sad long-lost love

His words sounded like an angel’s song,
But they had a demon’s intentions
Her aqua eyes gaze down into the lake,
Only to see the weeping reflections

Her soul grew somnolent,
Her heart began to ache,
She knew what had to be done.
But it was a turn she could not take.

She closes her eyes.
The thrashing memories become less violent.
And so she wonders.

If words are so meaningless,
Why don’t we remain silent?






It's a poem I wrote, please leave comments/suggestions/etc. No flaming, please! I know I'm not the best poem writer in the world. If you do like my writing, however, some of my other entries have stories I've written =)

If you wish to know, I made this peom really just out of boredom. XD But some things in the peom relate to my person experinces, such as the last part, is when Devin (Romanhigh) told me something that he didn't really mean. Needless to say, we aren't friends anymore.

I'm sure some of you are wondering this. 'LOLWATLAWLS RAMEN ROTE A LUV PEOM LAWLZ DUS SHE LYK SOME1 LOLLOLOLOLOLI BET S00!!!111"

Here is my answer. No, because this is not a love poem!!! If It was a love poem I would have said, "Roses are red, Violets are blue..."






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Kodokuna seishin
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commentCommented on: Sun Dec 20, 2009 @ 07:15pm
its so beautiful crying cry I wish I could write like that!


commentCommented on: Sun Dec 20, 2009 @ 11:06pm
OMG ramen you didnt tell me you wuld post post that! do you think i should post my poem about kai in my journal?



Abandoned Sword
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