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My little black book.
My very own Prince Charming <3 (FINISHED)
.:Unfinished version:.
He's the reason I stay up late
the morphine for my pain
always on my mind
I can't help but tempt fate

His smile brightens my whole day
Making me shiver when he says my name
he leaves a chill when he walks away
But he was like summer when he came

I can't seem to remember his face
But I can recall all the moments
Someone tell me what this is
what is this feeling of pure bliss?

It feels like a dream come true
but at times it's a nightmare
I keep smiling though I feel blue
The pain is something he helps me bear

I've found my very own prince charming
Laugh at me if you will
But I've found something worth missing
My heart has no room left to fill

He sees someone in me like no one else
It's impossible to be anyone but me with him
No one has gotten this close
He knows me better than I do within

How did I fall so quickly?
I never imagined I'd get knocked down this easy
I can't concentrate once our eyes meet
Even my friends noticed I'd been beat

.:Finished version:.
He's the reason I stay up late
the morphine for my pain
always on my mind
I can't help but tempt fate

His smile brightens my whole day
Making me shiver when he says my name
he leaves a chill when he walks away
But he was like summer when he came

It feels like a dream come true
but at times it's a nightmare
I keep smiling though I feel blue
The pain is something he helps me bear

I've found my very own prince charming
Laugh at me if you will
But I've found something worth missing
My heart has no room left to fill

He sees someone in me like no one else
It's impossible to be anyone but me with him
No one has gotten this close
He knows me better than I do within

How did I fall so quickly?
I never imagined I'd get knocked down this easy
I can't concentrate once our eyes meet
Even my friends noticed I'd been beat

Could this be called Love?
I ask myself this over and over
Yet no answer will come
He all but quiets this fear



((Still Unfinished FINISHED!. >< Any lines you can think of I'll try to put in another one!))

«I did all that editing, so the finished post is up in this journal. I'm too lazy to put in arenas, so i'll keep it in here. Thank You!»

«D e m o Signing out!»






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Noella Bean
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commentCommented on: Tue Dec 29, 2009 @ 01:52am
Lemme seeeee...

"I've found my very own prince charming
Laugh at me if you will
But I've found something worth missing
My heart has no room left to fill"

??
It's sorta cheesy though. sweatdrop


commentCommented on: Tue Dec 29, 2009 @ 02:14am
Hmm...

Nah its not cheesy its PERFECT!! 8D

Now that other three-liner is mocking me...what do I put there?? ><



fxith
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Noella Bean
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commentCommented on: Tue Dec 29, 2009 @ 02:22am
Hmmmm, uhhhhh.

Maybe you can tell about his flaws, but you love him anyway! 8D

EDIT:
"His smile brightens my whole day
Making me shiver when he says my name
he leaves a chill when he walks away
But he was like summer when he came"


commentCommented on: Tue Dec 29, 2009 @ 02:35am
Hmmm maybe xD

It's official. I love you. <3;
*hugs* THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOUUU!!! 8DDDD;;



fxith
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Noella Bean
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commentCommented on: Tue Dec 29, 2009 @ 02:36am
LOL ILU2

8D

I'll do my best to help yas! whee


commentCommented on: Tue Dec 29, 2009 @ 03:06am
LOL

And TY! <3; i cant wait to see the finished version when I actually make it lol
xD;



fxith
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Noella Bean
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commentCommented on: Tue Dec 29, 2009 @ 03:12am
Heehee Good luck! 8D


commentCommented on: Thu Dec 31, 2009 @ 02:09am
Ty <3; and you already know who I'm talkin bout, so I have no need to go into detail. I'm just gonna say it's something I came up with yet again staying up late anyway. Soo...That explanation's half true xD;;

And blah blah blah, thanks yet again. I'm moving the deadline to January 3rd...That's when I start Seminary again, so I'll be too tired to even think.



fxith
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