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Lanaja
my life, of fellings ect..
i fear its going to take me agin.. and it is.
everthing is quiet now, as i am left here with my thoguhts and the tears that role down my face..
Tho the tears wont wash away the pain thats consuming me, and it is comsuming me. Its letting me drown within my self. to heat my thought as the race pass me with out even letting me make any seance of them..
I a speeking out loud to no one and no one hears me speek..
i cant make my mind up on what to do next.
Or what to do with my thoughts..

So I will come to you with a tear sainded face and nothing left to give.
I will stand there before you with what i have left and its just a small hope.
a small ray of hope that you can do somthing.
Becouse i can no longer think.
i am just gone..

So wind take me and lead my action now.
Let the pull of the earth gide me thow life.
Let the rain wash away my tears .
Or let the sea take me so i might drown in its silents
So i can be free..
Let somthing happen..
becouse i am just stdaning here.. i cant move..
let these tears fall... a mind never at rest.

feb 11th 12:16am
numb..






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King of Trash
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commentCommented on: Sat Mar 06, 2010 @ 01:42pm
wow... just wow... this IS poetry... clean up the spelling and you could put this in the arena and easily do well...
But one thing bothers me... why are you soo sad? Has life been getting you down? Just try to remember to keep breathing... That was the key for me. I got to remember to breathe, and keep moving forward. and thank god for what he has given me, like the chance to go to school, my family, and the fact that I'm still alive! You can do anything with the fact that you are still alive!!
Just keep going... *hugs nicole* you can do it.


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