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"i told you so" a poem most girls can relate to
When i look at you all i see is her.

When you look at me all you see is a lonley girl.

When i look at her i see you sparkling in her eyes.

I sit and watch as you and her walk away.

Leaving me alone.

I sit and wonder what would have happened.

What might of happened if i stopped you from leaving.

What would have happened if i warned you.

Later that day you came to me.

Your eyes red from crying.

All i had to say was.

I told you so and all you did was leave me alone.

I tried and tried but you thought she was good.

Now you come back asking for forgivness.

I just shake my head and say "you had something good and you let it go."

Shocked you stand there thinking over what you did.

You fall to your knees gripping your head.

You finally understand the pain you caused me after all this time.

I walk away as you sit on the ground your head down crying.






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Fri Sep 24, 2010 @ 12:36am


I can really feel ur voice in this one. Maybe pay a little more attention to puncutuation, it will help it flow a little better. <3


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