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Life is so fragel and yet it gose by so fast. Yet why are we all so afraid of death? I have no clue but with this. I feel like I have limits to live. With being a teen well we have it rough. (I think that anyways)
With the pressures of our peers, family, friends, and our education. We have alot of things that keep building up, up, and up. We get strested out and sometimes we vent. The way to vent should not hurt you or the ones that care about you can and will get worried about you.
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"I, an angel of death"

Am I the one that punishes or is punished
I who live and breath on this planet
should
I be alive
or
is there
someone else that needs this life more then I
I have no need for life
I have no need to be happy
I have no need to be charished by other around me
I have no meaning to the world or earth
I only have meaning in Hell

Why you may ask
well it's because
I am an Angel of Death
I have no name or family
My family I had was only mother, father, and I
Mother and Father died of an illness
As lest that is what I heard from the Gods of Heaven
My name that the gods gave my was Sinner.
I have no name my mother or father gave to my so my name in SInner.
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Vol. 1


YAY Depressing Story YAY



Angel of Death,
that was bound to HELL.
Now lives on
seeking for reveng on the Gods of Heaven.
Gods she trusted since her birth.
That placed her there,
on that post with spears of blood.
Will feel her wrath.
That is filled with so much,
so much anger, sadness, despair, and hate for them.
For they killed her and that was the last thing,
this angel of death thought they would do to her.
No, but as she found out when she came back from the dead.
The Gods of Heaven also killed her mother and father.
That where also angels of Death.
This news she got
made her so angry
that the angel of death got the bloody wings that her father had to fly up to the Heavens,
and the horns her mother had with and amount of power that might kill her.
With those combind the angel of death had so much power that she could over come all the Gods of Heaven.
..........but..........
just as she was going to kill all of the Gods
she stopped and thought about what she was doing and if it was worth it.
Then the horns started to bleed and her wings changed to the color of her surroundings.
The Gods watch the Angel of Death change in fear
The Angel of Death was being purified.
She ran away
ran far far away from Heaven and Hell
So she could straiten things out on her own
As she thought and thought why this was happening to her
A vision came back to her as she was a little girl
with her mother and father
She rememberd that they told her she would get there trates as Angels of Death
because her mission was to do something something for all angels of death
So she understood then.
That her mission was not to kill the Gods of Heaven but
the one she must kill is
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is herself




she must kill herself for other because she has one of the devil's jewel in her
there are two more children with the same destiny that she must find before they die together
As a sacrifice for other like them
As she gose out looking for the other two
She thinks to herself what the ******** is happening to my and why must I do this?
There is no anser for her yet
until the day comes
for thenm to die
THE END






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Karane
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commentCommented on: Thu Aug 03, 2006 @ 08:17pm
Your story is very good. The only problem is it needs to be edited a bit for spelling errors.

Oh, if you want, you can show it to even more people at the Writer's Forum and get feedback from other people. Hopefully you don't mind getting some criticism from people, though, they are just trying to help.

Keep posting in your journal! biggrin


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