Good... *looks at clock* AFTERNOON! I have a poem here. Need opinions..
MOMMY
mommy was always frail,
she had a sickness that made her pale,
she coughed and wheezed and hacked all day,
she never had the courage to say,
"Daughter, i may die, but when i go, please don't cry."
One night she was sicker than ever.
When she coughed, she crumpled like a feather.
She was sick every day,
she finnally had the courage to say..
"Daughter i may die."
After she said that , she cried and cried.
"No!" i screamed ,and backed away.
I didn't know quite what to say.
Her eyes slowly closed, her hand dropped.
I screamed "No! this has to stop!"
Daddy came home, to see mommy had died.
When he did, He cried and cried.
He kept asking me, "Why?"
heart heart heart heart heart
It's been a year since mommy died,
Daddy apolagized for how he cried,
I said, "OK, and we should get on with life."
And he did, for a year later, he found a new wife.
It may still need some work but... What do you think?? heart heart
heart heart In memory of Mrs. Heins, My best friend's mom. heart RIP.
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