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Sonnet 9: Melodious Thought
{(~ "This here is a sonnet originally created by a good friend of mine, Ashley Kilgore, in which I've made several changes of my own to fit an assignment we had to do. A collaboration, I believe it's called..." ^^ "Enjoy." ~)}

Melodious Thought

~How can I maintain my cheery faรงade?
I could play tunes with an upbeat rhythm
Whilst I go about in a promenade
My mind pondering about the schism.~

~There'd be those around me, the passersby
Dispassionate they'd gaze; I'd pluck my strings
Continued stares like they see through a lie
I would play on, thinking of better things.~

~The notes would hum softly in frigid air
Reminding me how somber it had been
I'd grin, without even a single care
The music would grow, making a loud din.~

~Everyone else might be in apathy
But that doesn't mean I'd have to be!~

{(~ EDIT: "After I received the sonnet back in class, I noticed there were a few mistakes so I might get around to editing it, but for now....meh." ~)}






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Tarkonian
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commentCommented on: Tue Nov 28, 2006 @ 04:28am
Yay! Anti-Apathy!


commentCommented on: Sun Feb 04, 2007 @ 09:27am
My mind pondering about the schism.~
That just sounds dirty! gonk



Siin of Lust
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