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poems, drawings, some life
I put on a cheerful smile
When you are near
A smile on my face
A laugh in my voice
When you are gone my heart weeps
I cry the tears, their from my heart
You do not see the tears I cry
Only my smile
At times I feel the need to cry
These feelings that I cannot hide
you ask me what is wrong my love
I answer with a nothing much
You wonder if you caused the problem
I feel a pain when I hear that thought
Old instincts tell me what to do
Run away and hide yourself
Do not fight it makes it worse
I try to fight the thought of it
For you are more important
Fearful for I walk in the dark
Unsure of where to go
But you live in the darkness
Protected by it's shadows
So I take your hand and follow
For you are now my light
Though my heart's path is still untread
And I get lost at times
I hope that you will be with me
And never leave my side






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Robertp3001
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commentCommented on: Sat Dec 02, 2006 @ 03:33pm
Ooh, nice poem! mrgreen


commentCommented on: Sat Dec 02, 2006 @ 07:18pm
beautiful crying



xXYaoi is LoveXx
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Emrys_Tal
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commentCommented on: Sat Dec 02, 2006 @ 08:28pm
I really love it. Great poem.


commentCommented on: Sun Dec 03, 2006 @ 01:47am
a very interesting poem... you did a good job at bringing out the emotions... well done



Venom172
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Lyt Keeper
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commentCommented on: Sun Jul 15, 2007 @ 02:19pm
Great poem smile


commentCommented on: Sat Sep 22, 2007 @ 03:19am
beatiful it made me cry great job crying crying crying crying crying



carmen223
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