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~*Poetry*~
Yeah, say whatever you want, I really don't care anymore...
A Perfect World
~A Perfect World~

Awake to see
the chimerical site:
the dark, dank night
explodes to peircing light.
See the music
as it dances through the air;
feel the eloquent words
frightening away dispair.
Human blood
drips apon a rose;
now stained and scarred
with that that was ours,
no longer belongs to the corpses
that died in vain.
For they bring about
their own fear and pain.






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sugarbaby10101
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commentCommented on: Thu Apr 26, 2007 @ 10:30pm
Very good use of vocab biggrin

cool poem


commentCommented on: Fri Apr 27, 2007 @ 12:21am
pretty lots of imagry or somthing like that love the line with blood on a rose



koppygirl
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m y l o r i a n
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commentCommented on: Fri Apr 27, 2007 @ 02:10am
Woooowwww, that's deep
And very good!


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