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wtf is this?
*siiiiiiiiiigh*.......... .. . HAPPY THANKSGIVIN!!!!!!
sorry i keep freakin out about this but im always afraid that my story sux but since u guyz r my friends u don wanna tell me to not hurt my feelings but u guyz r my friendz so i shuld trust u enuff to tell me the truth and now im confused!!!!!! so (subject change) there's only 3 more characters and then u've met them all so far! one u'll meet on this page but u'll have to wait a tiny bit for the other 2.

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“Here.” Carina entered the room and threw an ice pack at Nicolas which hit him in the shoulder. Harrold was happy to see her although she didn’t seem to feel the same way. She looked quite cranky and rolled her eyes when Nicolas told her to “Watch it!” Harrold noticed that she was looking everywhere but at him.
“Wow, Carina. Who knew you had such a mean kick?” Harrold said with a nervous laugh, attempting to lighten her mood. Carina didn’t answer. She didn’t even bother to look at him. She just stomped out of the room.
“I don’t know what’s wrong with her.” Nicolas said, rubbing his shoulder and handing the ice pack to Harrold.
“I think I might have a theory.” Harrold mumbled. He felt really bad about what he had said to Carina. He hadn’t meant any of it but it seemed that his words had really affected her.
“Oh hey, there’s one more person you have to meet.” Nicolas left the room and soon returned with a small boy around ten years old. He had shaggy brown hair and freckles and he was holding a half eaten slice of pizza in his hand.
“Hey, wassup?” He said with his mouth full.
“This is Zack.” Nicolas introduced him as Zack waved energetically.
“Ew! Don’t talk with your mouth full.” Laura was looking at Zack with a disgusted look on her face.
“Shut up, retard!” Zack stuck his tongue out at Laura.
“Alright that’s enough!” Nicolas pushed Zack out of the room. “Go finish your pizza.” Nicolas called after him. “And you read your book.” He pointed at Laura.
“You’re not the boss of me.” Laura said stubbornly.
“Hey, I am the oldest here.” Nicolas stuck out his chest and put his hands on his hips, trying his best to look important. Valerie let out a snort of laughter and Laura quickly hid behind her book to hide her giggling.
“Nice to meet you all, but I’m going to go talk to Carina.” Harrold stood up.
“Ooooh!” Valerie and Laura giggled. Nicolas gave them a stern look and they returned to their activities.
“She’s in the kitchen, down the hall and to the right.” Nicolas said.
“Thanks.” Harrold left the room. He heard Nicolas trying to shut the girls up as they started up their “ooooh”-ing again.
Harrold entered an extremely large hallway. The floor was wooden and it had a rug a deep shade of red running down the middle. The hall was lit by two elegant chandeliers that hung from the ceiling. The hallway was kind of narrow but the ceiling was very high up. Harrold walked down the hall and stopped at the door on his right. He heard two voices coming from the room. One belonged to Carina, the other belonged to Zack. Harrold opened the door a crack and peeked in. He saw a table to the left of the room and a counter in the middle of the kitchen. Carina and Zack were sitting side by side on stools in front of the counter, their backs facing Harrold. A box of pizza sat beside Zack.
“Yes you have been acting weird lately! Everybody’s noticed it.” Zack was saying to Carina, his mouth once again full of pizza.
“I haven’t been acting different at all. I’m acting the same as always.” This time, Zack waited until he swallowed his pizza to answer.
“That’s not true. Something has changed. Right now, you’re just sitting there. The old Carina would be digging into this pizza with me and getting sauce all over her face.” Zack said this rather quietly. Carina just crossed one leg over the other and rested her chin on her hand. Kody stared at her for a bit, and then went on.
“You haven’t been talking, or doing anything fun, or even smiling. Ever since you brought Harrold here you’ve been a wreck.” Harrold’s heart sank as his name was brought into the conversation. “Carina, did that guy do something bad to you?” Zack’s voice was barely a whisper.


yay! so now just 2 more! weeeee! joe proposed to me and now were gettin married!!! BAYBAYZ!!!!! hah. teal don pee urself. MAN im tired...






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SuperSingingSox
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commentCommented on: Tue Nov 27, 2007 @ 12:26am
Kaytay... I luffle your story. Dun stop wiff it. Eber. Got it? Kay Good.


I feel bad for Carina now. Harrold is kind of treating her mean, but it's understandable. All that bad stuff did happen when she started showing up, but it could be just a coincidence.


And hahaha, kirsten married justin chatwin and had a baby named robbay. And me and kev got married. you and joe still are engaged. And I'm proud to say that I didn't pee myself after that once. =]


commentCommented on: Sat Dec 08, 2007 @ 11:22pm
I love all of your characters. This story is so good. I noticed something that made me laugh. Here You called Zack "Kody".
Zack said this rather quietly. Carina just crossed one leg over the other and rested her chin on her hand. Kody stared at her for a bit, and then went on.
but hey maybe you meant to do that and i'm just dumb sweatdrop



chibi-yami-oniguri
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