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If you fall, I fall.
If you love, I love.
If you die, I die.
If you saw me, I wouldnt notice.
If I met your eyes, you wouldnt meet mine.
If you cheat, I lose.
If I cry, will u leave.
If your gone, I cry harder.
If you notice, I just cry.
If you you come back, I stop.
If you give me a loving hug, i'll stay in your arms.
If you kiss me, i'll kiss back.
If you were here.... I wouldnt feel like this.
If we were friends, it wouldnt be the same
If you knew my past, i would know yours.
If I lost my heart, would you bring it back?
If I ran away, would you follow?
If I hurt u would you leave?
If my heart breaks, will you put it back to gether?
If I died, would you cry?





yes i know its short... but its from da heart.... and leave ne comments... i dont care if u want to flame mi.... i really dont care....

this is my very first poem..... a lil repetitive yah but apparently its good^^






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Orchid Miku
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commentCommented on: Thu Mar 20, 2008 @ 08:54pm
Very deep, but very expressive! Love the angst! You've got me all inspired now, lol.


commentCommented on: Fri Mar 21, 2008 @ 12:34am
Wow...... crying beautiful (weird words for a guy, I know....) it's just like you said, it feels like reading them from a persons inner heart crying



Zoxre
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arabelle elizabeth
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commentCommented on: Sat Mar 22, 2008 @ 02:15am
crying crying crying crying i heart that poem...i remember wen i read it at school so yea i didnt just read it...i couldnt crying crying crying crying ...btw...u have been LOGGED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! in a loving way... crying


commentCommented on: Mon Mar 24, 2008 @ 05:07am
i loooooove it ahah heart



serenity1301
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xBlackxOokamix
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commentCommented on: Sun Apr 20, 2008 @ 05:46am
you spelt feel wrong BAKA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
A$$HOLE!!


commentCommented on: Sat May 17, 2008 @ 10:11pm
Very well done. Glad I wrote it down. Hmm....
Now, what songs do you think will go well w/ this? wink
Yes, it's what you think. I do have another AMV up too. xD.
BTW, why did BlackxOkami call you an @$$hole for spelling 'feel' wrong?
I wonder why she didn't say anything when I spelled 'poem' wrong....



WishICared
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