This is my last resort,
either you leave him or i'm out that door
I'll be gone in a minute or two
Im done with this "game" You've put me through.
Every day your with me,
Every night your with him
I want it all to stop,
In me there's just to much pain within.
I am trying to comprimise
Why can't you just choose?
Which person you want,
and which person you lose.
You have 24 hours,
after that i'm gone for sure,
It will end soon,
This is my last resort.
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This just has stuff in it that i write...its mostly emo-ish and retarded love-ish type poums...not exactly about anyone i know....and if u like what u read comment...not like anyone cares about my crappy writing...
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I'm really hoping this isn't from personal experience.
Also, first line third stanza, comprimise is spelled "compromise."
You're getting better. But maybe you could improve this one by removing some extra words.