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the map to pen island
*dun dun DUNNNNN*
poems 4 and 5
Dreams of an Unbroken Heart(poem #4)
I lay in my bed
tying to find my dreams
my chest hurts from the beating of my heart
when I do find my dreams
all I see is death and hate
the beating of my heart
or the dreams of killing and hate
I can't tell which is worse
sometimes I wish the beating and the killing
would stop
I wish I could close my eyes
never to feel the beating or to see the killing again


Wait(poem #5)
an abandoned parkinglot
drenched in rain
a boy waits
waits for his love
his head hidden in a hood,
a tear rolls down his face
the warm loving hearts of friends and family wait inside for him
but he waits
waits for his love



ok
poem #5 is really poem #3
i just never posted it






User Comments: [6]
feuerkrieg
Community Member





Mon Mar 26, 2007 @ 05:12am


cool. i like how they flow. and in freeverse. neato.^_^


Aquinia
Community Member





Mon Mar 26, 2007 @ 12:55pm


what about poem #2


charshu
Community Member





Mon Mar 26, 2007 @ 07:20pm


yay! they're very good!!!! i really like poem #4 3nodding
sorry, i would write more but im not feeling up to being on the comp for much longer


Wraith092
Community Member





Tue Mar 27, 2007 @ 02:47am


*claps alot*
good jobio! sweatdrop


comicfan92
Community Member





Tue Mar 27, 2007 @ 03:08am


Awesome poems man. Oh and if charshu happens to read this, you do realize even if he denies those poems are about you. No offense Ramsey.


hopeless dreams 2
Community Member





Sat Apr 07, 2007 @ 05:42pm


ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh it is o awsome you are getting much better


User Comments: [6]
 
 
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